I won't flatter myself that either its unearthing from the deep strata of my own recorded history, nor its fragmentary nature, make it worthy of sitting so close to Sappho, but I do like it's bitter black humour.
Dead wrong
You lie
like a dead sheep
upstream in the river
of my life.
You lied.
A lie by ommission
is still a lie
and just as rotton
as a fetid corpse
in swift, clear water.
one of my favourites :) dark and bitter though it may be!
ReplyDeleteWonderful use of language!
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